Many people feel that urban environments are more unhealthy than they have ever been to. What do you think are the main causes of this problem? What measures can be effective in tackling this problem?
It is considered that the ambience of city areas
are
prone to poor Suggestion
is
health
beacause
of sedentary for the reason that; on account of
because
life styles
and a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyles
poulltion
. In order to handle these debilitated conditions, certain steps should be taken by government and people in cities.
In undesirable state of the natural environment being contaminated with harmful substances as a consequence of human activities
pollution
this
materialistic world, everybody is busy in
Suggestion
with
monotonus
daily routines so that they can have enough money to enjoy tediously repetitious or lacking in variety
monotonous
luxrious
life styles. displaying luxury and furnishing gratification to the senses
luxurious
luxuries
Furthermore
, in this
race of earning more and more, humans forget about their health
as they work day and night, and then
do not have enough time to take care of themselves. This
leads to an unhealthy life and a person is prone to get sick or suffer from morbidities at early ages. Indeed, people have to balance their work with their healthy activities and they should extract some time for exercise or sports. As quoted, if a person is working
for 8 hours, Suggestion
has been working
has worked
works
then
in evening one must do exercise or play a sport, so to have some physical activity. It will not only strengthen that person but
relaxes his or her nerves.
Accept comma addition
person, but
On the other hand
, in metropolitan areas there is a great risk to health
of indiviual
is pollution. Overcrowded and congested roads participate in increment of pollution in urban areas. a human being
individual
Similary
, there is a growth in automobile Suggestion
Similarly
use
that adds to worsen the situation. So, there should be negotiation between governing bodies to lessen the use
of automobiles, as now there is facility of eletronic
fleets, and increase availability of public transport. of or relating to electronics; concerned with or using devices that operate on principles governing the behavior of electrons
electronic
Such
measure
will lead to decrease Suggestion
measures
use
of cars on roads and so a decrement in pollution level. As illustrated, if people have availability of good transoprt
facility, good hygienic move something or somebody around; usually over long distances
transport
envoirnment
and reasonable the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
environments
fairs
to an agenda of things to do
fares
use
the service, then
they must prefer these travelling mods.
In conclusion, city dewellers
are at high risk of getting affected by polluted surroundings. It is all due to modernization and lack of interest of people about a person who inhabits a particular place
dwellers
dealers
health
. Moreover
, contamination by vehicles on roads accelerate this
process in the vacinity
of cities.a surrounding or nearby region
vicinity
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