You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table illustrates the proportion of the monthly household income of five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing, and entertainment Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The table shows the share of household
income
that the five European countries
spend on food
and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment. As you can see in the table, all 5 countries
spend most of their household income
on food
and drinks and housing. France
, Germany
and the United Kingdom are in the lead in terms
of housing. In particular
: UK- 37%, Germany
- 33%, France
- 31%. Turkey
and Spain
, on the other hand
, spend most of their income
on food
and drink, Turkey
– 36%, Spain
– 31%. “51” In terms
of clothing, it is low in all 5 countries
. Of these countries
, Germany
leads by 15%. According to
this
indicator, France
and Spain
are in the last
place, France
– 7% and Spain
– 8%. Respectively, Turkey
and the United Kingdom have 12 and 11 percent . “80” In terms
of entertainment, Germany
is in the lead, ie 19%. And Great Britain and Turkey
are almost half of this
figure, in particular
: Great Britain – 11%, Turkey
– 10%. Spain
is in second
place with 15%, and France
is in third
place with 13%. What do we understand from this
table?
In conclusion, Turkey
and Spain
are the leaders in food
and drinks. The UK, Germany
and France
are the leaders in housing income
in five European countries
. “26” In terms
of clothing and entertainment, Germany
is at the forefront.Submitted by gaini.azim on
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