the line chart shows the results of survey giving the reasons why people moved to the capital city of a particular country. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The line chart represents why
people
moved from hometown
to the enormous Correct pronoun usage
their hometown
city
. Overall
, considering four reasons during the 15 year
period between 2000 and 2015.
Add a hyphen
15-year
According to
the line chart, the main reason was family or friends. In 2000, 60000 people
moved from their hometown to the capital city
. After 10 years, over 90000 people
preferred to change their hometown. But in 2015, it decreased and nearly under 90000 people
. The second
reason was the study. It was increased significantly by some fractions. However
, in 2000, just 25000 people
moved to the capital city
but in 2015 it was nearly 90000 people
. More people
attended education in 15 year period.
In comparison, employment and adventure were not very important such
as other reasons. In addition
, both had the same number of people
at the start of the period and it was nearly 1000 people
. Both categories were increased, employment
going up by a large number of Change preposition
with employment
people
and it was over 2000 in 2015. But just 15000 people
moved to the capital city
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, city with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "moved" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 3 times.
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