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The graph below shows four countries of residence pf overseas students in Australia. Summarize the information ba selecting and reporting the main features, and make make comparisons where relevant

The graph below shows four countries of residence pf overseas students in Australia. Summarize the information ba selecting and reporting the main features, and make make comparisons where relevant
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The line chart illustrates the
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 of oversea students from four countries in Australia over the period from 1982 to 2000. The general overview here is that the
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 of Singaporean visitor
arrival
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 for education was surpassed by the
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 of other countries in almost time. To specify, the
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 of Singaporean students studying abroad in Australia increased gradually from 0 in 1982 to 10000 in 1995 before a significant climb to 20000 in 2000.
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 Hong Kong stayed the same as Singapore until 1987, followed by a dramatic increase to nearly 19000 students in 1997 and...

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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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