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Some people say that children should learn all the subjects equally , whereas , others think that they should only learn what they are interested in it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

#people #children #subjects
In
this
 highly competitive and contemporary era, education has played imperative role in everyone's life.
However
, there are different type of opinion of two groups, whether pupils have to learn every
subject
 to be sophisticated and enhance their
knowledge
 or they must select a
subject
 in which they have
fascination
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a fascination
.
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.
 Withstanding
,
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,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 certainly vote for latter perspective
,
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,
thus
,
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,
both the views will be analysed in the following paragraph before a reasoned conclusion is drawn. To commence with, examining the former view The primary argument the saboteurs would put forward is students should be learnt each and every
subject
by
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in
 school as it essential to mould them into better individuals in future
.
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.
 By
this
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 mean that students can become sophisticated and can enhance their
knowledge
 if they tend to study all subjects rather than looking for choose some among all subjects. They
also
 add that as far as modern culture is concerned
,
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,
 students should learn all subjects so that
thry
people in general
they
 can
feet
a display of bad temper
fit
 at every job and it helps them to become well-being in the future. On the downside, the latter view
suggest
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suggests
 that if children do not have interest to learn all
subjects
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subjects, then
then
 they are unable to be attentive during learning those subjects.
This
 is because
,
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,
 they get bored while
studing
reading carefully with intent to remember
studying
 those subjects
.
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.
 In a resulting they can't get what they are studying currently as they do not have that much interest in it.
Furthermore
,
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,
 people are not enough mature to learn all subjects when it comes to at grown up level that its become burden for them.
Hence
,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 would say students can become well behaved and get enough
knowledge
 In a particular
subjects
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subject
 and feel
supirior
of high or superior quality or performance
superior
 if they learn interested
subject
. Conclusively, to wrap up the
discusion
an extended communication (often interactive) dealing with some particular topic
discussion
,
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,
although
 Students should be taught every
subjects
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subject
 as it helps them to enhance their
knowledge
,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 firmly believe that it is good to focus on those subjects in which
tgey
people in general
they
have fascination
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have a fascination
 about that
subject
tgat
pointing out something
that
 will helps them to give best in their field as they
can not
can not
cannot
 feel
burden
Suggestion
burdened
.
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