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People eat more processed food than they did in the past. Why is this? What are the effects of this?

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Nowadays, people
tends
Suggestion
tend
 to consume cooked
food
 from the restaurant than they did in the past. Processed
food
 makes it a lot easier and faster for a worker that needs to wake up early in the morning and have no
time
 to prepare his or her meal at home. Prepared meal teams to be more convenient and
time
 saving for workaholics. But there are some detriments to
this
effect
. On one hand, it is
time
 saving for people that leave home early morning. A banker that needs to wake up early in the morning to prepare for work doesn't have
time
 to prepare her meal. She has to leave the house so early in order to beat the huge traffic on the road. On her way to work she stops by a restaurant to grab herself some
food
 which is much
convenient
Suggestion
more convenient
.
On the other hand
, rather than not eating anything which might cause severe
health
 challenges, it is advisable for one to get already prepared
food
 at the
groceries
Suggestion
grocery
 store to mitigate the
effect
 of severe stomach upset.
On the other hand
, processed
food
 could have
effect
Suggestion
an effect
 based on the present
health
 challenges. With so much fat, salt and sugar it contains, could bring
health
 issues
such
 as diabetes, obesity, hypertension etc. Already prepared meal can make people fall ill due to some unwanted spices and
preservatives it
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preservatives, it
 could contain that your body might not want.
For example
, a breastfeeding mother is prone to
health
 challenges and that of her baby due to the preservatives added. The diabetic patient doesn't need too much sugar, and just as salt riding the blood level of a hypertensive person when processed
food
 is being consumed too much. There are too many
health
disaster
Suggestion
disasters
 in processed
food but
Accept comma addition
food, but
 due to the fact that we cannot do without them keeps people going on
daily basis
Suggestion
a daily basis
. All in all, it is much
time
 saving and convenient for people that leaves the houses early morning. But they should
also
 consider the side
effect
 it poses to human body as
government
Suggestion
the government
 needs to regulate the
food
 companies to cushion the
effect
.

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