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Write a letter to your colleague asking for help in setting up an equipment for your presentation. In your letter, you should: tell when and where the presentation will deliver describe your arrangements say him/her what equipment you need.

#colleague #equipment #presentation #arrangements
Dear Bob, I hope you are doing great. I’ve
finally
 managed to find some free time to write you a letter. As you know, I’m going to be the main speaker
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 the “World Without Trolls” conference. It will take part on the
21th
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 of March at 3.00pm at Buddah conference hall which is located on Minova street 3. As you can imagine, I’m super busy with the preparation for it right now. As we previously discussed, You have a lot to do in order to help me with
this
 presentation.
Firstly
, I expect you already prepared all slides for the slideshow. In
this
 context, I want to mention that photos for these slides should be bought or downloaded from free
photobases
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photo bases
photo based
, we don’t want problems with photos’ owners.
Finally
, I need your help with setting up the equipment. There is the full list of what we will need: a high specs projector,
a
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 HDMI cable, and a mobile 5 in 1 sound system. If you have any questions about technical specs, copyright
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legislations
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 or anything else, feel free to contact me via my mobile phone at any time of the day. Best regards,

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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