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In today's competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents to go out to work. While some say the children in these families benefit from the additional income, others feel they lack support because of their parent's absence. Discussion

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In recent years, we can see that particular family consisted of a father who went out to
work
 and a mother who stayed at home and bring up her children. It is the norm for
both
 males and females to
work
.
This
 situation can affect ch
ildren
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children, both
both
 positively and negatively. And I will discuss now.
Initially
, it might be said that the children of working parents are in an ad
vantages p
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advantage
osition we
re t
In or at or to what place
where
heir parents are able to afford more luxuries
such
 as new clothes, video games or mobile phones.
However
, there are those who claim that when
both
 parents
work
, their children do not get enough support and attention. The absence of parents at home could make it easier for children to get involved in
such
 things as drugs or underage drinking.
On the other ha
nd
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hand, both
both
 parents have to
work
 nowadays, but if parents make time for their children in the evenings and at the weekends,
then
 the children will not suffer in any way. It must be stated that the extra income generated by
both
 parents working, makes for a much higher standard of living which benefits the whole family. When I was growing up,
both
 my parents worked and I was always well provided for. I think that it would sometimes have been better if I could have seen more of my parents. To sum up ,
w
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,
e cannot change the fact that
both
 parents need to
work
 now, I think we need to support our parents financially.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • dual-income households
  • standard of living
  • extra-curricular activities
  • private education
  • financial stability
  • independence
  • responsibility
  • emotional support
  • academic support
  • parental guidance
  • strain on family relationships
  • external caregivers
  • flexible working hours
  • work-from-home opportunities
  • quality time management
  • balanced approach
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