Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam'. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can government take to discourage people from using their cars?

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It is certainly true that

traffic jam

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the traffic jam

is one of the biggest

problem

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problems

all over the globe. In many cities people purchase their own

car

has been growing so rapidly in the

last

thirty years and due to increasing

car

ownership many

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ownership, many

cities are now

became

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becoming

one big

traffic

. I think

this

phenomenon is absolutely true. In

thies

denotes a person or thing

this

eassay

an analytic or interpretive literary composition

essay

I explain what measures government

take

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has taken

to stop using their own cars.

To begin

with, There

are

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a plethora of reason that people start to buying their own

car

Firstly

, In the modern phase of life everyone is busy in businesses, jobs, study etc. They prefer to take a personal

vehicle

to save their time. Another reason is that we

are not depend

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don't depend

do not depend

on anyone if our personal

car

is with us

becaues

for the reason that; on account of

because

in emergencies cars are really useful.

Secondly

, Sometimes people

also

need

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need a vehicle to

vehicle

to attend meetings and ceremony that can be held in a very short time.

Although

, Increasing the

car

ownership has a considerable

problem

in all over the world and from

this

in many

cities

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city

traffic

issues are rapidly

gowing

(biology) the process of an individual organism growing organically; a purely biological unfolding of events involved in an organism changing gradually from a simple to a more complex level

growing

going

day by day. There are a numerous measures that can government take to discourage people from using their own cars. One of the major

problem

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problems

is air

pollution

due to

traffic

jam. So,

Government

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the Government

can organise seminars for using less personal cars and give briefly explain about air

pollution

that if we are not taking care of our

environment

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environment, then

then

the day will not far at all that we

aal

quantifier; used with either mass or count nouns to indicate the whole number or amount of or every one of a class

all

are put in the trouble.

Moreover

, Another

noticable

capable or worthy of being perceived

noticeable

measure is that government

encourage

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encourages

people to take public transportation in use daily basis.

Also

society transporatatrtion

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society, transportation

society transportation

cheap

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cheaper

than

personal

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personal vehicles

a personal vehicle

vehicle

. It saves us

lot

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a lot

of time and duo to

this

also

pollution

will go

doen

spatially or metaphorically from a higher to a lower level or position

down

done

in control.

For example

, Due to

coronavirus

our Indian Government will announce that 21 days of lockdown and no one should be

allow

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allowed

to take their personal

vehicle

and in result

pollution

ratio will down so rapidly.

IIt

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I It

is our onus that we have a knowledge about

traffic

and

polltuion

undesirable state of the natural environment being contaminated with harmful substances as a consequence of human activities

pollution

. In the conclusion, from all aforementioned points, I hold my view that

Government

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the Government

must take measures to solve

this

problem but

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problem, but

also

it is our onus that we have to cooperate with it.

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Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam'. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can government take to discourage people from using their cars?

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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