You travelled abroad and faced some problems at the airport.Write a letter to the airport manager.In your letter provide Your flight details What is the problem Suggest some improvements

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter to complain

against

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the baggage recovery section at the airport.

Last

week, I arrived in Toronto, Canada for a business trip.I booked

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flight number R2J34I5 from your airlines on the 10th March, Sunday from Delhi, India and it was promised that I will get my luggage at the Toronto airport. Let me explain my situation.After arriving when I went to the recovery section.I was told to wait for some time since it was their lunch break.But to my

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I waited for about two hours, and

unfortunately

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there was no one to look into the matter.

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the lunch break is usually for only one hour,

consequently

the taxi hired charge me extra for waiting so long. I would like to suggest you

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take a proper check on your staff activity, and

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recommend that one staff member should always be there even during the break hours so that travellers may not have to face inconvenience. Hoping for

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kind consideration. Yours faithfully, Sarabjeet Singh

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