You travelled abroad and faced some problems at the airport.Write a letter to the airport manager.In your letter provide Your flight details What is the problem Suggest some improvements

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letter to complain

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the baggage recovery section at the airport.

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week, I arrived in Toronto, Canada for a business trip.I booked

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flight number R2J34I5 from your airlines on the 10th March, Sunday from Delhi, India and it was promised that I will get my luggage at the Toronto airport. Let me explain my situation.After arriving when I went to the recovery section.I was told to wait for some time since it was their lunch break.But to my

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I waited for about two hours, and

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there was no one to look into the matter.

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the lunch break is usually for only one hour,

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the taxi hired charge me extra for waiting so long. I would like to suggest you

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take a proper check on your staff activity, and

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recommend that one staff member should always be there even during the break hours so that travellers may not have to face inconvenience. Hoping for

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kind consideration. Yours faithfully, Sarabjeet Singh

kajalmaan.16Mon Apr 13 2020

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

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8 paragraphs

173 words

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You travelled abroad and faced some problems at the airport.Write a letter to the airport manager.In your letter provide Your flight details What is the problem Suggest some improvements

Some people feel that entertainers (e.g. film stars, pop musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of job should be highly paid?

Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

tipping is a common practice at restaurant in many countries. some people beleive tipping a great way to apreciate service workers, other think it should be the responsibility of the boss. discuss both sides and give your opinion

Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In many countries schools have severe problems with student behaviour. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?