You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter give details of your study plans explain why you want to get a part-time job suggest how your friend could help you find a job
Dear Ann,
It was so long time that I hadn't heard anything from you and
also
we hadn't seen each other since last
summer.
So I have good news! I'm going to come to enter your city's university this
autumn. I have already found my surname in the entry list. I will study in the marketing department. My teacher said that we will have flexible
timetable.
Due to my timetable, I think I could try to work after classes because I will have Add an article
a flexible
some
plenty of time Correct quantifier usage
apply
instead
of just spending my free time on the streets while going for a walk, I decided to earn some money.
In this
case, I would like to ask you for help in searching for some
temporary job for me. Unfortunately, I haven't any experience, but I'm a very hard-working, sociable person. So if you see some job offers which can apply to me, I would like to know about them.
Correct determiner usage
a
Also
what is about your Add a comma
,Also
studying
? Is everything ok? What is your work as a Replace the word
studies
shop-assistant
? Do you like it? Please, write me back as soon as possible.
See you soon,
Maria.Correct your spelling
shop assistant
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite