Spoken communication is always more powerful than written communication. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Communication is an intrinsic need of human being which make us different from other species. Mankind has developed different means for
this
purpose that some of them may be more powerful than others. Speaking is an amazing and complicated tool that ease message convey.
Nevertheless
, talking face to face or get connected vocally by phone
for example
, hearing words
is
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are
far more effective than any other means of communication.
This
is because
tone
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the tone
, sensation and feeling could
also
be transmitted to the counterpart, we are talking to.
This
ability of our voice
let
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lets
us to read between the lines and get what somebody really wants to say, even if they ran out of the words.
For example
, we can determine and distinguish sadness, anger, frustration if somebody tell us a specific sentence with
same words
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the same words
but different intonations.
On the other hand
, writing used to be so popular before technology revolution which enabled us to get connected within a
second
, no matter where we are. In the past, writing a letter could be a valuable or even expensive way of communication since there were hardly any other options. Writing, nowadays, is a great source of
misunderstanding especially
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misunderstanding, especially
in the social network or messaging context. The main reason is that the receiver
do not have
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does not have
a clue about sender temper unless, they could see or hear each other. So, it is common to read a written message by our own prejudice and react
accordingly
while it may not be true. A father,
for example
, may ask his son to be home as a matter of emergency
situation but
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situation, but
his son might comprehend it an implementation of ground rules. In conclusion,
although
writing
letter
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a letter
the letter
was a great tool for interactions, it no longer is
attractive especially
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attractive, especially
among
millennium generation
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the millennium generation
and generations after
as a result
of
emerged
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emerging
technologies.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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