The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
bar chart illustrates statics about men'
and Change noun form
men's
women'
Change noun form
women's
involving
in full-time and part-time discipline
It is visible that, there are some changes in the sum of men and women in both, full and part-time Replace the word
involvement
education
.
Firstly
, if we look at charts
regarding full-time Correct article usage
the charts
education
, we will see that there is gradual
increase in the total of female Add an article
a gradual
the gradual
students
from 1970th to 1900th and in 1990-1991 the number of female students
has
noticeably changed in a positive way. Unnecessary verb
apply
On the contrary
, for the
men, Correct article usage
apply
students
' participation in full-time education
declined in 1980th
compare to 1970th and the statistics Correct article usage
the 1980th
shows
thatCorrect subject-verb agreement
show
,
there is a slight augmentation in 1990th.
When it comes to part-time Remove the comma
apply
education
, it is doubtless that female and male students
have chosen this
type of education
less before, but later this
statics Correct determiner usage
these
has
changed and the number of Unnecessary verb
apply
students
increased year by year and this
augmentation is more for women in 1980198, but it is approximately the same in 1990-1991.Submitted by sebnemrecili on
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