Computers do not help children learn more effectively. On the contrary, the use of computer's has a negative effect on children's physical and mental development. To what extend do you agree or disagree ?

In the 21st century, it is obviously difficult to assess the contribution of computers to young people. While some people take the position that computers not only reduce the productivity of

learning but

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learning, but

also

jeopardise physical as well as

psychological growth

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the psychological growth

of a child, I am convinced that

computer

's effectiveness depends on the way children utilize. On the one hand, if a child is taught to use

computer

functions properly, it will, admittedly, offer certain merits

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of

learning procedure.

First

and foremost, thanks to advances in

computer

technology, people from all walks of life will have a feasible opportunity to access orthodox education without the fear of physical factors,

such

as geographical distance, which has been hard in the days before - if not impossible. Not to mention that learning through

computer

, without doubt, ensures flexible studying hours. To make it clear, unlike limited time in conventional courses, people of all ages are able to cover learning materials at their own pace.

This

, apparently, acts as a contributor

to their

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to, their

passion for learning.

On the other hand

, it is inevitable that the dark sides of over-

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reliance

relying

on computers are even more tangible to children's physical and mental process. To commence with, in terms of physical health, those who are long-time heavy

computer

users are prone to obesity resulting from

lasping

a failure to maintain a higher state

lapsing

leaping

into

sedentary lifestyle

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a sedentary lifestyle

that they only look fixedly at

computer's screen

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the computer's screen

.

In other words

, these youngsters will suffer serious loss of vision, back pain and so forth if they do not reduce the

dependance

the state of relying on or being controlled by someone or something else

dependence

on

computer

devices.

Furthermore

, unbridled use of computers, for all intends and purposes, exerts lethal impacts on children's communal lifestyle which has been scientifically proven that

computer

users have a proclivity for social isolation by virtue of their in default of real interaction and a sense of community. Taking into those above-mentioned characteristics, one can conclude that the influence of computers in modern days

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virtually relies

on each person's approach,

this

can

brought

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bring

both positive and negative aspects to children's development. Thereof, moderation is the key.