Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is argued that parents whose children are receiving private education should be exempt
from
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From
taxes which
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taxes, which
contributes to advancing public education system. Personally, I
totally
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Totally
disagree with
this
point of view. Obviously, sending children to private schools is not reasonable for the government to
have
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Have
a
tax
exemption on their family. Administrative procedures
on
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for
calculating and
refunding
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Refunding
of educational
tax
are
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is
such
a laborious process that government has to mobilize
many
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Many
their well-experienced staffs to manage those tasks.
For instance
, governments
have
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Have
collected total taxes to fund their budget and
then
, they give a suitable allocation
to
to a degree exceeding normal or proper limits
too
each
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Each
field according
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field, according
to a strict set of criteria, which makes them difficult to accurately
separate amount
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The separate amount
Separate amount
of money that they are going to invest in public
school
from the total.
Moreover
,
tax
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the tax
is an undeniable duty of each citizen, not many of whom may never use it,
though
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Though
, they still take responsibility to pay a certain amount of
tax
.
For example
, the fact
that
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That
people get direction ahead of time does not mean that they could not to pay money to
maintain
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Maintain
the GPS network.
Besides
, state-owned
school
is a public good which is a right
that
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That
individuals have
opportunity
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the opportunity
an opportunity
to avail and they can choose to give it up, which is
their
in or at that place
there
personal
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Personal
choice but taxation is obligatory.
Additionally
,
tax
payment of both families of children studying at private and public
schools
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Schools
acts as a fundamental step to maintain sustainable development of society. If
parents
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Parents
of children attending a private
school
are allowed to have
tax-free policy
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a tax-free policy
, there
will
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Will
be a huge imbalance in government revenue and
this
could lead to a negative effect
on
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On
the schooling's quality
.
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.
Furthermore
, the poor finding it difficult to send
their
objective case of they
them
offspring
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Offspring
even to public
school
because of having a limited income, now, are facing
to
to a degree exceeding normal or proper limits
too
two
financial
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Financial
burden to fill the gap that causes by the rich who send their offspring to private
school
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School
and have no need to pay
tax
. To sum up, I think that
tax
-free for families putting their pupils into
private
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the private school system
school
system
should
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Should
not be implemented because all citizens must
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
their responsibility of paying
tax
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Tax
and help strengthen
quality
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the quality
of
schooling system
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the schooling system
to bring equal educational
opportunities
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Opportunities
for students.
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