Do you agree or disagree with following statement? Parents are the best teacher.

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Fathers and mothers are the

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coach. I agree with the above-mentioned statement in some extent and I will develop my viewpoint as follows. The

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reason I agree with it is that parents play an important role in their children’s learning, development, and upbringing. It is because the child sees his parents since he is born;

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, parents set examples for their children.

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, fathers and mothers not only teach their children how to speak, how to eat and drink, how to wear cl

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clothes, but

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earn human quality and how to become a good person.

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, parents want their children not to repeat the mistakes that they have done in their lives, and they know and observe their children’s be

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manner of acting or controlling yourself

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nd character.

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, I think that parents are the best teacher rather than any school and any learning ce

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The other case I agree with it is that we see that generally, some orphans who could not get the attention of their parents don’t have any basis of ethical, moral and social values as compared to the ones who have been trained by their parents. It is due to the family stability and maturity of some parents.

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, some fathers and mothers drink and smoke

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to the child, so it influences negatively for children because children are watching parents and learning from them. Some parents do not forbid something

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as information, movie, advertisement and TV entertainment that negatively affects their children’s be

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manner of acting or controlling yourself

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nd ethics.

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why children's upbringing and position in society depend on parents and family members. All in all, parents are the best teacher and teach every step of living

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life.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

283 words

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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