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Do you agree or disagree with following statement? Parents are the best teacher.

#parents #teacher
Fathers and mothers are the
first
 coach. I agree with the above-mentioned statement in some extent and I will develop my viewpoint as follows. The
first
 reason I agree with it is that parents play an important role in their children’s learning, development, and upbringing. It is because the child sees his parents since he is born;
in other words
, parents set examples for their children.
For instance
, fathers and mothers not only teach their children how to speak, how to eat and drink, how to wear cl
othes but
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clothes, but
also
 earn human quality and how to become a good person.
Also
, parents want their children not to repeat the mistakes that they have done in their lives, and they know and observe their children’s be
havior a
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
nd character.
Therefore
, I think that parents are the best teacher rather than any school and any learning ce
nter.
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
 The other case I agree with it is that we see that generally, some orphans who could not get the attention of their parents don’t have any basis of ethical, moral and social values as compared to the ones who have been trained by their parents. It is due to the family stability and maturity of some parents.
For example
, some fathers and mothers drink and smoke
next
 to the child, so it influences negatively for children because children are watching parents and learning from them. Some parents do not forbid something
such
 as information, movie, advertisement and TV entertainment that negatively affects their children’s be
havior a
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
nd ethics.
That is
 why children's upbringing and position in society depend on parents and family members. All in all, parents are the best teacher and teach every step of living
this
 life.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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