You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months Say how your work could be done while you are away Ask for his/her help in arranging it

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Dear sir, I am writing

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letter to request you to kindly give me an opportunity to work in

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company's

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the company's

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head office in Canada. As you know,I am working with

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esteemed

company

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since

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ten years and my report till now is marked as perfect in all fields .

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, my husband's

company

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is sending him on a project from 1st July till 31st December to Canada. We have two kids, So to look after them I want to accompany my husband ,as by luck our

company

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headquarters

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head quarters

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are there, I would like to serve their during that duration and will gain new technology that will help us in bringing our

company

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to an upfront. In my

absence

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my work will not suffer and I will be finishing my project till

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and if any query arises

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Aanchal will tackle the same. And I assure you, I will be available on call whenever needed and will reply

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emails

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. I know you have very strong connections with Human Resource Team at

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and will render my best possible report before them

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so that I will be able to get the opportunity and inculcate newer approaches to expand our

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. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Ankita Sharma

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

216 words

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professional development
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