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Online shopping is significantly increasing. What effects does this have on the environment and the types of jobs required?

#effects #environment #jobs
At present people depend over the
internet
 and it is true that
internet
Suggestion
the internet
 brings us more facilities as well as it changed everything in the world. I disagree with
this
 topic and here I have given some reason why disagree with
this
 topic. As early, newspaper and
television
 published the actual news, which one we trust blindly. Another reason when people read newspapers, they can share with other. And when people watch
television they
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television, they
also
 like to gossip with the other. Some people can watch
television
 on the outside like as a market.
As a result
, they can enjoy and they cannot spend
money
 for that.
Secondly I
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Secondly, I
 believe that when people watch any programme on
television they
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television, they
 feel relaxed and enjoy.
For example
, when I have watched
television
 I like to watch with family.
On the contrary
, it is not possible on
internet
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the internet
.Because, when people use
internet
Suggestion
the internet
 they can share one or two persons, but sometimes they feel uncomfortable. I strongly believe that
television
 and newspapers published actual news where
internet
 published fake news.
Moreover
, when we read news in newspapers and watch
television
 programs we feel safety and we do not feel tension for
money
.
For example
, when people use
internet
 at
first
 they face networks problem. People need more
money
 for buy
internet
 packages. But watching
television
 programme and reading newspapers side people does not spend more
money
 like
internet
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the internet
. Using
internet
 has some facilities. It makes our life easy.
For example
, when we need any essentials information at
first
 we get
this
 information from
internet
. Another reason
internet
also
 plays a vital role in breaking news.
For instance
, we any crime or other events happen in the world at
first
 we get
this
 news from
internet
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the internet
.
Secondly
, we cannot only get news information from
internet
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the internet
 as well as we get various help from
internet
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the internet
 which one not possible from newspaper and
television
. To conclude, newspapers and
television
 plays a vital role from ancient time but at present
internet
 totally made our life easy
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