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At present people depend over the
internet
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and it is true that
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the internet
brings us more facilities as well as it changed everything in the world. I disagree with
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topic and here I have given some reason why disagree with
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topic. As early, newspaper and
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published the actual news, which one we trust blindly. Another reason when people read newspapers, they can share with other. And when people watch
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television they
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television, they
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like to gossip with the other. Some people can watch
television
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on the outside like as a market.
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, they can enjoy and they cannot spend
money
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for that.
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Secondly I
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Secondly, I
believe that when people watch any programme on
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television they
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television, they
feel relaxed and enjoy.
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, when I have watched
television
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I like to watch with family.
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, it is not possible on
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the internet
.Because, when people use
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internet
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the internet
they can share one or two persons, but sometimes they feel uncomfortable. I strongly believe that
television
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and newspapers published actual news where
internet
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published fake news.
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, when we read news in newspapers and watch
television
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programs we feel safety and we do not feel tension for
money
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.
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, when people use
internet
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at
first
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they face networks problem. People need more
money
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for buy
internet
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packages. But watching
television
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programme and reading newspapers side people does not spend more
money
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like
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internet
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the internet
. Using
internet
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has some facilities. It makes our life easy.
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, when we need any essentials information at
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we get
this
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information from
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. Another reason
internet
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also
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plays a vital role in breaking news.
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, we any crime or other events happen in the world at
first
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we get
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news from
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internet
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the internet
.
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, we cannot only get news information from
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internet
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the internet
as well as we get various help from
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the internet
which one not possible from newspaper and
television
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. To conclude, newspapers and
television
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plays a vital role from ancient time but at present
internet
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totally made our life easy
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