There is a lot of pressure on young people today to succeed academically. As a result, some people believe that non-academic subjects, such as physical education and cookery, should be removed from the school syllabus so that children can concentrate on academic work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Students nowadays are under increasing pressure to achieve academic success in order to get into a good university or secure a well paid job. For

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reason some people argue that schools need to focus on academic subjects and non academic subjects should

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not be taught. I would argue that while academic skills are important, schools need to teach a wide range of both academic and more skills-based subjects.

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be about teaching academic

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skills, but

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a wider range of life skills so that students can take an active part in society upon leaving

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. Practical subjects can help to teach these skills to students.

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, physical education teaches students both how to work as part of a team and

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the importance of being healthy.

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, if cookery is

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students will learn a great deal about health and nutrition.

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, academic subjects are not equally important for all students. There is the possibility of including more vocational non academic subjects on the syllabus like woodwork, textile design and computing skills. By studying these subjects, students will increase their employment prospects and be better placed to secure employment when leaving

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. It is important to remember that not all students will continue to higher education and

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needs to enable these students to find work.

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, too much pressure should not be placed on students. Taking part in non academic subjects like art, music or drama gives students the opportunity to be creative.

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stress levels and be more productive in other areas. In

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would argue that

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academic subjects are very important,

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should not be the sole focus of a

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syllabus. There are a number of benefits to teaching students non academic subjects.