some people think it's better to choose friends who always have the same opinion as them. other people believe its good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them.

Friendship is a relation which everyone needs. A
friend
is the one who does not come from the
family but
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family, but
meet you in the journey of life. In
this
essay we will discuss about
this
relation, what
kind
of company we should keep the people who have the same
thoughs
the content of cognition; the main thing you are thinking about
thoughts
thought
as you, or one that
has little different
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has a few different
has few different
aspects to look for you, for your own good. There is a saying that "a
friend
in need is a
friend
in deed
in truth (often tends to intensify)
indeed
", according to
this
a good
friend
is who always be on your side, no matter what you are going through
regardless
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Regardless
of who you have to give in return. In my
experiance
the accumulation of knowledge or skill that results from direct participation in events or activities
experience
, a
friend
who
always think
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always thinks
is always thinking
the same like you will always be able to make a good bond with you.
you
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You
will always feel happy when you think of
somethink
an unspecified thing, agency, amount, etc.
something
to do in your life and a
friend
is always there to help you and boost you to make it right and achieve your goal. These
kind
of friendship will always
motivates
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motivate
you to do what you
though
the content of cognition; the main thing you are thinking about
thought
of. Most of the time, when you do something results in positive for you, but on some of your
decisions maybe
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decisions, maybe
it may hurt someone from your family or others. Though, you talk to your
friend
who
also
think the same that
its
it is
it's
good for
you but
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you, but
you both do not realise that it may hurt someone.
these
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These
kind
of deeds will may
also
endup
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end up
in an opposite result. On the
otherside
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other side
, where your
friend
may not be thinking like you and you maybe are not happy with it as well. But in the end or when you realise that the things you
where
have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
were
thinking was not right you maybe get your
expeced
considered likely or probable to happen or arrive
expected
result. In these
kind
of bonds you have a chance of
brian
that part of the central nervous system that includes all the higher nervous centers; enclosed within the skull; continuous with the spinal cord
brain
storming in which you may get better ideas for the purpose of what you intended,
also
in
this
relationship you
also
feel the respect for
eachother
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each other
which is very crucial for a long lasting bond with someone.
this
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This
also
will help you to find a better path and direction and
also
becomes a
really
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real
learning experience for both of you as you both have your different
experiances
the accumulation of knowledge or skill that results from direct participation in events or activities
experiences
experience
of life.
As
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At
they
objective case of they
them
, two minds are better than one. In my opinion, I would
say
express in words
tell
a
friend
who sometimes makes you caution about the path or decision you like to go for will always be better for you and the other relations you have. It may
also
stop you for doing
something but
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something, but
that will prevent you from making a mistake and you will be more happy and
greatful
feeling or showing gratitude
grateful
of
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for
you
of you or yourself
your
friendship
beacuse
for the reason that; on account of
because
it will give
an other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
reason to make a new and better way to go on.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • bond
  • support
  • unconditional love
  • shared values
  • mutual understanding
  • trust
  • emotional well-being
  • interdependence
  • societal norms
  • companionship
  • loyalty
  • advice
  • experiences
  • mentorship
  • trustworthy
  • reliable
  • reliable
  • cherish
  • strengthen
  • deepen
  • attach importance to
  • prioritize
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