You attended a meeting last week but you are not happy with the hotel which you stayed in. Write a letter to the organizer who hotel for you. In your letter, you should tell: (a) what the problems were (b) what you didn't like about the hotel (c) what do you want organizer to do.

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter to express my utter dissatisfaction
towards
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the booking arrangements that had been made at your end. To commence with, all the
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for the cab and food had been shared with your respective executive. But to my surprise when I reached
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the airport, no taxi or cab was there to pick me up
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the hotel.
In addition
to that, after waiting for long two hours I booked myself a cab for the same.
Secondly
, being a vegetarian, I strictly mention that food needs to be vegetarian. It was astonishing for me when I got served
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non vegetarian
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food.
Also
, no breakfast was included in my booking.
Furthermore
, the quality of service at the hotel which was booked was really unfavourable. The hygienic service quality is very disappointing.
Moreover
, I would like the concerned authorities to
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the requirements of all the clients which will
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to build the quality level of your organization. I will be looking forward
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the appropriate action from your end.
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faithful Thomas

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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