In some countries, online shopping is replacing shopping in stores. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

The state-of-the art digital revolution has been a major

drive

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driver

of the burgeoning number of online shoppers in recent years, accounting for the gradual replacement of physical stores. Embedded in

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essay is the idea that

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change will have a profoundly positive

affect

a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon

effect

on people’s lives. On the one hand, the main contribution to an increase in prevalence of electronic method of purchasing goods is its convenience. Consumers are possible

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for

merchandise items from the comfort of their homes or workplaces. Online shopping is

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made it easier for them to cancel

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the transaction

transaction

a transaction

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,

aleviating

provide physical relief, as from pain

alleviating

elevating

the pressure of shopping

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consumers is a main concern. Generally, in

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a physical store

physical store

the physical store

physical stores

, the shoppers are liable to be swayed to buy items by the sales representatives, whereas with shopping online experience, they can buy the goods of their own choice,

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, some traditionalists might oppose the idea of purchasing goods online for 2 main reasons.

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, lacking close examinations of the products deters people from merchandising items. The electronic images of the products may be misleading, which do not match with their physical appearances and quality in terms of the colours, sizes, materials…

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, a sense of fulfilment of going shopping physically will stimulate buyers to choose conventional shopping method.

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, physical stores allow price negotiations between sellers and buyers. Or else, they are possible to experience

show- room atmosphere

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the show - room atmosphere

a show - room atmosphere

, scent and sound that they cannot witness through their computer screen. In conclusion, I am of the opinion that

ecommerce

transactions (sales and purchases) having the objective of supplying commodities (goods and services)

commerce

can bring about a number of benefits to human beings, which is sufficient to gain ground worldwide,

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trend entails some drawbacks.