People living in large cities face several problems. What are these problems? Should governments encourage them to move to smaller towns?

It is often argued that many people tend to settle down in large cities. People staying in big societies might have some issues and governments persuade them to go
suburbans
relating to or characteristic of or situated in suburbs
suburban
sometimes.
This
essay will address the problems of staying big cities and why governments suggest people to move to small town.
First
of all, big-city
life
affects citizens' health physically and mentally. People may see how complicated large society
is particularly
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is, particularly
when they go to work.
For example
, many vehicles on the road might pollute city's environment and
then
it leads people's health badly because
traffic jam
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the traffic jam
creates air pollution and it harms people's lungs.
Furthermore
, population growth becomes busy and loud
life
so people have to work
quickly
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quickly, then
quickly than
quickly than than
then
they might have so much stress.
In other words
, they would suffer mental disease
such
as depression and anxiety so they need to take medication to solve it.
Also when
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Also, when
they abuse the drugs, their body will be ruined.
On the other hand
,
Government
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the Government
can help inhabitants when it comes to reducing
this
issue. What the government's suggestion
is develop
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is developed
has developed
develops
the small communities to move people there.
For instance
, when council
develop
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develops
tiny
cities
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city's
inhabitants might have more opportunities to get a job because the towns need employees to maintain. Once people are hired
jobs there
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jobs, there
they economy of the cities will increase
then
people might satisfy their
life
due to the fact that they are able to enjoy their free time.
Moreover
, countrysides' air is not bad as the opposition of
big city
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the big city
a big city
big cities
. In conclusion, in spite of the fact that
urban
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the urban
has many problems people should consider to live there or not. Council can inspire them in order to improve the quality of
life
.
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