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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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It is commonly considered by many that the university students should focus on learning courses which have broad scope in the future
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 as the Science and Technology.
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, others tend to oppose
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 idea and believe that the youngsters should take courses of their own choice. In my opinion, we do not know how the future job market will look like and
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, people should focus on what they are passionate about. On the one side, those who opine that students should learn subjects related to the Science and technology can easily point out its importance in the real
life
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 to say, nowadays, people are completely dependant upon the electronic gadgets
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 as the mobile phones to communicate with the society, vehicles to commute, heating equipments to survive in the cold weather.
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, it means the technology has become an essential necessity in the
life
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 and
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, everyone should know its usage to make their
life
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 easy,
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 they would end up wasting their time and energy.
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, giving the opportunity
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 the youngsters to choose their higher education according to their wish has various advantages.
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, it is
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highly
 likely for students to become successful if they love, what they are doing. To exemplify, Mark Zuckerberg, the CEO of the Facebook, become successful at the age of 19 because he was passionate about software development which makes him choose the computer Science and Engineering as his majors in the university.
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, the vast majority of people are just guessing about Science and technology being the future of
job market
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a job market
 as there is no written evidence to support
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 statement.
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, we as a society should encourage people to choose what they are passionate about,
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 of forcing them to pursue their education in the field of Science. To conclude,
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 taking Science as a major course in the university education seems beneficial due to its importance in the real
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However
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, it can hamper the success of an individual and
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 should be considered precisely before choosing it.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • foster
  • engagement
  • excel
  • innovative contributions
  • diversity in research
  • well-rounded education
  • broad perspectives
  • critical thinking skills
  • mental well-being
  • burnout
  • forced academic paths
  • job-ready
  • skills shortages
  • tech-driven economy
  • employment rates
  • changing job market
  • utilitarian subjects
  • aptitudes
  • wasting talent
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