Nowadays university education is considered very important for people's future. However, there are a lot of successful people who didn't get higher education. Do you think that higher education is necessary to succeed in life?

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Society needs all
kind
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kinds
of skills to grow and thrive. These days, higher education is essential for people’s work career.
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There
are myriad of successful
men which
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men, which
did not achieve university degree. In
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essay, I will support the point of view that claims that
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a university degree
is not must.
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and Foremost, community is always in need for all
sort
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sorts
of experiences. While, most of the students dream about the higher education, community mess a lot of skills to grow.
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The
target of the educational system is to secure the required resources needed in all fields.
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, the recruiting sites
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are
full of requests to hire technicians, and
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, a few engineers are requested.
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lead to lower wages to engineers as they are more than the
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need.
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, the cost of technicians has increased dramatically due to their
scarsity
a small and inadequate amount
scarcity
.
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,
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a day
the day
after another society notices a new thrived business
men
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man
who even did not compete their
education but
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education, but
preferred to engage in the
market
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and gain their experience from dealing with
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a variety
of issues.
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, the average income of workers who use their experience to solve
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problems is more than a lot of people who
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have completed
their master degree but do not have a lot of practical knowledge about how
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market
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the market
is managed. In a nutshell, from my point of view,
every one
all people
everyone
should study the local
market
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carefully to know where he could fit and what is the
sutable
meant or adapted for an occasion or use
suitable
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job that may with a good future and
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serve the public.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • foundation
  • critical thinking
  • innovators
  • vocational training
  • persistence
  • soft skills
  • adaptability
  • non-traditional pathways
  • lifelong learning
  • disparities
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