Many people join distance-learning programs (study material, post, TV, Internet) and study at home, but some people think that it cannot bring the same benefit as attending colleges or universities does. Do you agree or disagree?

Through the play, "The Importance of Being Earnest" and the story" Masque of Red Death," selfish was shown in all nature of the characters;
furthermore
, selfishness is always present in the most important or simplest things in humans and
also
manifested through the essentials of each human's life,
such
as wealth or health, Lady Bracknell concerned about jack's business and did not care about his feeling about he did not know his identity, and the prince in the face of life and death, he closed
this
palace and didn't care about people outside, especially, those people seemed coming from different period and class, they are all selfish and cared about the benefit of themselves and all of that was shown regardless period class and gender.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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