The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph shows the combined time spent in billions of
minutes
, on three different kinds of
phone
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in the United Kingdom, from 1995-2002.
Overall
, local calls were the most popular over the whole period, with national and international calls and calls on mobiles
second
and
third
respectively.
However
, the number of
minutes
spent on international and national calls and mobiles both increased over the period; with mobile
minutes
increasing dramatically,
thus
narrowing the gap between the three categories by 2002.
Minutes
spent on local calls fluctuated over the time period, with just over 70
billion
minutes
in 1995, peaking at approximately 90
billion
in 1999 and
then
steadily decreasing to just over 70
billion
minutes
in 2002. National and international calls increased steadily year on year, from just under 40
billion
minutes
in 1995 to a peak of just over 60
billion
in 2002. Mobile
minutes
increased at a very rapid pace from approximately 3
billion
in 1995 to around 45
billion
in 2002. Mobile phone usage nearly doubled from approximately 22
billion
minutes
in 2000 to 40
billion
in 2001.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words minutes, billion with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • total number of minutes
  • telephone calls
  • categories
  • local – fixed line
  • national and international – fixed line
  • mobiles
  • general trend
  • yearly totals
  • significant changes
  • milestones
  • data
  • rise significantly
  • decline
  • steady increase
  • fluctuate
  • peak
  • exponential growth
  • over the period
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