Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas (in words, pictures, music or film) in whichever way they wish. There should be no government restrictions on what they do. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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The freedom to express their own thoughts is considered as essential for creative artists.
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means that their works should not have an
intervension
the act of intervening (as to mediate a dispute, etc.)
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the government
. I agree with
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, for the reason that the most part of the time, the
art
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is against with the state’s ideas,
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, if the authorities would have restrictions, probably there are not possible to find a good quality of
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art
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the art
.
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, many artists do not have a high salary,
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several times they have to sell themselves to the system, and
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means to have a work with government’s restrictions. I do not
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determine the result of (a competition)
judge
them, because survive should be the
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for the humans.
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, in Chile the State
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gives
many scholarships to help
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create
creative
.
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founds have
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signal going into an electronic system
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imputed
inputted
to the cinema
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(postpositive) however
though
Banco Estado, but the overcome is a film of low quality. For the previous, I think
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fundamental that exist
artits
a person whose creative work shows sensitivity and imagination
artists
artist
that can be independent and can criticism the government’s administration.
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gives to result a great contribution to society, due to allow to think deeply about how our mind is
controled
restrained or managed or kept within certain bounds
controlled
by the powerful people.
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, in the epoch of the
chilean
of or relating to or characteristic of Chile or its people
Chilean
dictatorship, there are musicians that help a lot for the country return to democracy, those singers was: Victor Jara and Los Prisioneros. To conclude, in my opinion writers, photographers, singers and film directors should have the freedom to do the creative work that they want.
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, in some case will be essential the support of
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the State
, for the reason that
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is not well paid. But the goal should be that there are not
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, for the reason could exist censure, and
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is likely the worst enemies for
to
being one more than one
two
excellent
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.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Freedom of expression
  • Censorship
  • Artistic integrity
  • Cultural identity
  • Social responsibility
  • Public order
  • Discrimination
  • Hate speech
  • Self-regulation
  • Government intervention
  • Vulnerable groups
  • Creativity
  • Democracy
  • Fundamental right
  • Moral obligation
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