Some people say that the best way to improve public health is b increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and other measures are required. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Enhancing public

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is essential for a functional society, especially in today's world of increasing obesity and sedentary lifestyle. One method of raising

societies

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society's

societies'

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is to increase access to sporting facilities. There is;

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, opposition to

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proposal.

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essay will debate these opposing views and conclude with my opinion that improved sports facilities are necessary for the publics' wellbeing. Many suggest that

health

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is strongly linked to physical

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. It is undeniable that exercise can improve not only the body but

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has positive benefits for mental

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.

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professionals,

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, generally ask patients about their level of physical

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and encourage people of all ages to increase their level and duration of exercise as is appropriate to their situation.

Clearly physical

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Clearly, physical

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needs the support of numerous types of sporting facilities, from public tennis courts and golf courses, to more basic walking and cycling tracks. Other

proponants

a person who pleads for a cause or propounds an idea

proponents

hold that physical

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is less vital for public

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and that other measures are more valid. Disease, lifestyle choices, mental

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and an aging population are challenges that many countries face; leading to immense pressure on

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services.

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, it is a fact that obesity is one of the most serious

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risks in today's world which needs urgent attention from governments. For many, action is required to improve hospital services, the number of GPs and nurses and community

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programs which reach out to more

vunerable

susceptible to attack

vulnerable

members of society. It seems that the issue of where

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funding is most needed is

contraversial

marked by or capable of arousing controversy

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. In my opinion, it is worth investing in sports facilities within communities. For many people there are few opportunities to join a private gym or pay for a personal trainer. Communities living in

high rises

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a high rise

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, and with no access to open countryside desperately need public sporting

facilites

a building or place that provides a particular service or is used for a particular industry

facilities

. Young people require a place where they can meet friends and play ball,

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as a football field or basketball court. Older people would benefit from public swimming pools or safe parks. It is necessary for governments to meet the

health

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needs of the

populus

people in general considered as a whole

populace

pupils

and one means is through the provision of public sporting facilities.