The line graph shows the consumption of 4 kinds of meats in a European country from 1979 to 2004.
The line graph illustrates the fish and meat (chicken,
beef
and lamb) Use synonyms
consumption
in a country in Europe between 1979 and 2004. Use synonyms
To begin
, the grams per person per week of chicken showed an upward trend over 25 years. In comparison, fish, Linking Words
beef
and lamb experienced a downward trend.
Looking at the details, Use synonyms
beef
was most consumed among the 4 types of meat at about 210 Use synonyms
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gram
per person per week in 2001. Fix the agreement mistake
grams
However
, the Linking Words
figure
experienced a sharp decrease to approximately 180 Use synonyms
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gram
before bouncing back to around 230 Fix the agreement mistake
grams
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gram
in 1984. From Fix the agreement mistake
grams
this
year onwards, Linking Words
beef
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consumption
continued to fluctuate before hitting about 140 Use synonyms
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gram
in 2004.
In terms of Fix the agreement mistake
grams
consumption
of chicken, the Use synonyms
figure
was Use synonyms
at
around 140 Change preposition
apply
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gram
in 1979. It Fix the agreement mistake
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then
gradually rose to about 180 Linking Words
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gram
in 1989 and overtook Fix the agreement mistake
grams
beef
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consumption
. The Use synonyms
figure
continued to rise to around 240 Use synonyms
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gram
, becoming the most consumed meat in 2004.
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grams
On the other hand
, the Linking Words
figure
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of
lamb consumed started at 150 Change preposition
for
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gram
at the beginning of the period and fluctuated to about 80 Fix the agreement mistake
grams
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gram
in 2004. Fish Fix the agreement mistake
grams
consumption
was stable and showed a slight drop from about 52 grams to 50 grams throughout 25 years.Use synonyms
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