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The graph below shows the quantities of goods transport in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.

The graph below shows the quantities of goods transport in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.
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The line chart illustrates the number of products shipped in the Unit Kingdom by various types of transport namely, road,
water
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, railway and pipeline from 1974 to 2002.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 all
type
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types
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 of
transports
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transport
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 experienced an upward trend, in which the road always was
a
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the
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 mode of transport which people used the most, following that were the
water
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,
railway
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the railway
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 and the lowest was the pipeline. There was a slight increase in the number of transports by
the
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road from 70
million
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tonnes
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 in 1974 to 82
million
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tonnes
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 in 1990,
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 it continued to rise gradually to 97
million
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tonnes
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 in 2002.
At
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In
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 the beginning, the amount of shipped the pipeline was at 4
million
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tonnes
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, by 1994, it
grew
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grown
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 moderately to 22
million
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tonnes
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 and by 2002,
this
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 figure still did not change. In 1978, the
amount
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number
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 of goods shipped by the rail line and
water
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were
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was
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 the same at 40
million
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tonnes
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. There was a fluctuation in the number of
transporting
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transported
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 by
the
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railway,
while
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 the amount
of
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apply
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shipped
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shipping
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 by
the
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water
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 climbed slowly to 68
million
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tonnes
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 in 2002.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, million, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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