In many countries schools have severe problems with student behaviour. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

It is true that the issue of pupils’ bad attitude is getting worse all over the world. There are numerous reasons why the institute goers show

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bad behaviour, but steps can be taken to tackle

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Behaviour.

Firstly

, there is a lack of proper training among the teachers on how to control the pupils.

Secondly

, we live in a society where kids are showered with instant gratification.

Parents

are allowing their offspring whatever they demand almost instantly, and

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listen to the adults.

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in terms of TV, phone and computer games;

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them unsocial and they end up acting in a bad manner.

Overall

,

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these key causes, I believe the young generation of today

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in a rough and unacceptable way.

However

, these mentioned issues are critical but solvable. To start with, the elementary level tutors are in need of a great deal of mandatory training on controlling the

students

.

For instance

, in Japan, for the first five years, the institutions only teach the manner and culturally appropriate behaviours to the children.

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, the responsibility of the

parents

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kids by putting a limit to their demands, since

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and instant gratification these children don't tend to obey the teachers when they are at university.

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, the

parents

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with their children, rather than making them occupied with phones, TVs and computer games. Spending quality

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and proper counselling can make these youths behave better. In

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, to make the behaviour of the pupils better what's needed is good training for the teachers, restricting the screen

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for the

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