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The chart below gives information about the number of social networking sites people used in Canada in 2014 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about the number of social networking sites people used in Canada in 2014 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart demonstrates the number of social networking sites visited by internet
users
 in Canada between 2014 and 2015. We can see from the data that, many people
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 social media
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 than one platform. The number of
users
 who did not use any social networking site slightly decreased from 22
percent
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 in 2014 to 21
percent
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 in 2015. The highest proportion of
users
 that used only one site dramatically declined from 36
percent
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 in 2014 to 28
percent
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 in 2015.
However
, the number of
users
 who use more than two social networking sites gradually
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 about 1
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 to 4
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 in 2015.

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