The chart below gives information about the number of social networking sites people used in Canada in 2014 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart demonstrates the number of social networking sites visited by internet
users
in Canada between 2014 and 2015. We can see from the data that, many people using
social media Wrong verb form
use
more
than one platform.
The number of Change preposition
on more
users
who did not use any social networking site slightly decreased from 22 percent
in 2014 to 21 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
in 2015. The highest proportion of Change the spelling
per cent
users
that used only one site dramatically declined from 36 percent
in 2014 to 28 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
in 2015.
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per cent
However
, the number of users
who use more than two social networking sites gradually growth
about 1 Replace the word
grew
percent
to 4 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
in 2015.Change the spelling
per cent
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