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The table below gives information about languages with the most native speakers. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information about languages with the most native speakers. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates the
number
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 of native
speakers
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 of six
languages
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as well as
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 the
number
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 of
speakers
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 of these
languages
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 as an additional
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language
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. It is noticeable that the
number
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 of
speakers
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 of Mandarin Chinese is strikingly higher than the other
languages
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 with over one billion
speakers
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. People who speak Mandarin largely speak it as a first
language
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 (900
million
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). In comparison to
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 only 190
million
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 people speak Mandarin Chinese as an additional
language
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. What is remarkable about English
speakers
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 is that the
number
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 of
speakers
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 of English as an additional
language
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 is higher than that of native
speakers
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 of English (603 and 339
million
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 respectively).
While
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 the total
number
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 of Hindi
speakers
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 (490
million
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) is roughly equal to that of Spanish
speakers
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 (420
million
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); when it comes to speaking these
languages
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 as an additional
language
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 the
number
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 for Hindi is much higher (120
million
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) than that for Spanish (70
million
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). Native
speakers
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 of Arabic and Portuguese are similar in
number
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 with 206
million
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 and 203
million
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 respectively.
However
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, the
number
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 of Arabic
speakers
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 as an additional
language
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 (24
million
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) is almost 2.5 times higher than
speakers
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 of Portuguese as an additional
language
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, speakers, languages, language, million with synonyms.
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