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Your visit in unusual restaurant. Telling us your experience and how you felt about the visit.

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The most amazing
restaurant
 in the world. There are a lot of restaurants in the world,
however
, there are only a few places where a visit can take your breath away. The Ithaa Undersea
Restaurant
 is one of
such
 places where everything is amazing. Three years ago, during our holiday in the Maldives, my husband invited me to
this
 place
that is
 no ordinary
restaurant
. I had heard about the place before, but I did not think that I would have the luck to visit them. Because the tickets were expensive and there were not many seats, just twelve people could be inside at one time. He never told me how he got the reservation. When we arrived there, we had a short introduction about how they built the
restaurant
. After that, the waitress asked us to take off our shoes and we descended on the spiral stair into the
restaurant
. The
restaurant
 was five meters under the Indian Ocean, there was a huge glass ceiling so the effect was amazing. I felt like fish in a big aquarium. I have never seen
such
 a beautiful and spectacular view before. Around us was crystal-blue water in which swam a lot of colourful fish and a few turtles. We got a small table and a short menu. My husband ordered meals because I could not stop looking at the sea animals. The food was delicious, but I did not want to eat seafood, so I ate just salad. Sadly the time went by very quickly and we had to go back to the hotel. The visit to Ithaa Undersea
Restaurant
 was a wonderful experience. That showed me how beautiful the underwater world is and how many different forms of life are there. That
also
 helped me understand that people should protect our planet and every life on it. I hope I can go to see the place again in the future.
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