Throughout the history, male leaders often made the society more violent and conflicting. If women governed the world, the world would be more peaceful. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

In today’s modern

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, gender equality has been receiving a great deal of attention in the society, which leads to some claims that male politicians are responsible for conflicts and restless wars

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between

countries and if women took over the

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, we would live in a more

peacful

not disturbed by strife or turmoil or war

peaceful

society.

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there are some reasons behind

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claims, any judgement about the direct link between government policies and the gender of the government leader is flawed. On the one hand, it is acknowledged that many fierce wars, along with painful consequences, have occurred under male

goverments

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

governments

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might be because of

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men's

leader ship

the activity of leading

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style, which tends to be aggressive and bad

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tempered

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War and

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War lead to millions of casualties and leaders like Adof Hitler are criticized for having caused blood wars.

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, some public traditional opinions claimed that men would govern their countries better than women. Take China as an example, throughout the country’s history, most of the rulers were men and

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it was believed in

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country that women should manage the house chores rather than run the country.

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However

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prematured

born after a gestation period of less than the normal time

premature

to view that feminine leadership model will make the

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more peaceful. In fact, history shows that there are many examples of instability created by women having political power. One is that Margaret Thatcher as the former prime minister of the UK ordered to bomb Lybia or Condoleeza Rice as the former foreign minister of the United State approved and supported the military attack on Iraq, which led to death of innocent people,

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, what determines wars or

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the promotion

of violence in the

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is not the gender of governors.

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, power

nowaday

the period of time that is happening now; any continuous stretch of time including the moment of speech

nowadays

is no longer concentrated in the hand of one person, and the crucial decisions

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as whether deal with the conflicts by violence and army forces or not is formulated from a referendum. In

orther

not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied

other

others

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words, these decisions between peace and hostilities are simply the reflection of the public opinion rather than being determined by the leader’s natural dispositions. All things considered,

althought

even though, in spite of the fact that

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the contributions of female leaders to the

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is undeniable, the view that women as

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leaders can bring a more peaceful

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is intuitive. What the

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needs is

gorverment

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

government

leaders who could implement policies flexibly to cease conflicts and wars.