The private vehicle has greatly improved individual freedom of movement. Moreover, it has also become a status symbol. Yet the use of private vehicles has contributed to some of today’s most serious problems. How can the use of private motor vehicles be reduced?

Nowadays, the growth of
motor
vehicle
is increased rapidly.
Motor
vehicles
such
as cars and motorbikes
also
represent their status in social life.
Motor
vehicle
made us easy to go anywhere from one place to another since we live in
an
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a
modern
area
a period marked by distinctive character or reckoned from a fixed point or event
era
. Yet the
use
of private vehicles danger the environment and harm our earth. The
motor
vehicles lead us to many problems
for example
air pollution, sound pollution and
also
car
or
motor
accident. We can reduce the
use
of private
vehicle
by many ways to make sure that our earth is safe.
Firstly
, we can make a
car
free day event from Saturday to Sunday. It can help reduce the used of private vehicles. We can add a prize so many people will be interested and join the event. We should give some information about public transportation and persuade people to take the public transport. So that the civilian will not
use
their own
vehicle
.
Secondly
, we can promote a charity by cycling. We can ask many people to help the charity by cycling, we are not going to stay in one
place but
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place, but
cycling to many
village
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villages
and place to maximize the donation
.
Accept space
.
This
cycling for a good cause we can get a lot of money for the charities and minimize the
motor
vehicle
use
.
Furthermore
, increasing the
price
of the
fuel
will reduce the
use
of private
vehicle
because people will think twice to buy
car
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a car
the car
cars
because of the expensive
fuel
price
. With the high cost of
fuel
civilian may think that to maintain their
car
is high-priced. We can lower the
price
of the bicycle so that many people will buy bicycle than the
motor
vehicle
.
In addition
, we should give a more tax on private
car
ownership. In conclusion, there are many advantages of using
motor
vehicle
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vehicle, however
however
the usage of
motor
vehicle
will cause much pollution and harm our earth. So, we must reduce the amount of private
vehicle
and should think about the public transport now. In consequence their usage must be
reduce
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reduced
by
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with
increasing the
fuel
price
, make a
car
free day event and
also
promote the public transportation.

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