Some people think that it is a good thing for senior management positions to have very high salaries compared to other workers of lower positions in the same company. To what extent do you agree.

It is often argued that higher management has bigger salaries as compared to
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workers.
However
, some people believe
this
is unfair and want a change. In my opinion, I slightly disagree
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statement and will provide illustrations for the same. First of all, in a company there are many layers of work and some of them require expertise. Not all people can work in
such
positions as it is more demanding, those having
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at higher levels
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are highly educated and have practical knowledge of all jobs which are being carried under the banner of a company.
For instance
, A CEO knows how a product is manufactured from scratch and how to manage the production as well.
Secondly
, they are equipped with skilful knowledge which is used in all directions of task,
thus
they are responsible for each and everything aspect
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the association. They are not confined to a corner of the job, but they look for all the jobs being carried out in the company. Higher
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responsibility is compensated by higher salaries.
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, a worker does not know how to manage money and
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accounts, it can only be managed by a highly skilled employee. Lower posts are more on the ground and relate to specific work in a specific job,
on the contrary
,
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posts people manage various domains at once.
Thus
,
to conclude
,
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worker devotes time and incur responsibility more as compared to
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worker
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so they should
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higher
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.
However
, some facilities
such
as Mediclaim should be given to all irrespective of their positions.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Senior management
  • Salary disparity
  • Incentives
  • Income inequality
  • Organizational culture
  • Career progression
  • Employee morale
  • Compensation
  • Financial success
  • Decision-making
  • Responsibility
  • Merit
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