You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: "In many countries today, there are concerns about the unhealthy lifestyles that people lead. What health issues are linked to modern lifestyles? What answers to these problems can you suggest?" Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words

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There is no doubt that daily lifestyles can affect either physical or mental

health

problems. The people know the ways of being healthy

lifestyles

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lifestyles, however

however

there

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are

have been

rarely people achieve. In fact, there

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are

much

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many

health

issues leading to unhealthy lifestyles the people dismiss

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People enjoy

diverse range

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a diverse range

the diverse range

food

such

as convenience

food

and street

food

. People busy seldom all day to prepare meals for family in

socio

relating to human society and its members

social

economic.

Furthermore

, a several range of

food

with varying taste attracts for

food

lovers. Eating shows from various countries are one of the popular trends in recent years. That is a way to try the taste of diverse convenience

food

for

food

lovers. As a result, above these eating habits lead to obesity that can cause

health

problems likely to diabetes and

health

diseases. On the other hand,

lack

Suggestion

the lack

of doing exercise is one of the reasons for physical

health

issues. People usually work all day long even though they forget to do physical exercise for physical

health

. Another factor to consider is mental

health

problems called psychological illness. Owing to internet age today

Accept space

the people surf the net daily for various kinds of

matters

the tangible substance that goes into the makeup of a physical object

materials

. According to experts, the social media users are less emotional satisfying themselves. For

this

reason,

this

emotion

make

Suggestion

makes

leaving them feeling socially isolated that is a kind of depression called mental illness. Especially, some suicide cases are obvious due to cyber bullying on social media.

Hence

although

surfing the net supports the

people

Suggestion

person's

peoples'

lifestyle,

this

will be

also

a kind of unhealthy lifestyle if the people addict too much. In brief, there could be many things the people dismiss to care for

health

. It is not possible to follow all the healthy tips the people know. All the factors mentioned above are

also

linking with modern lifestyles. In my point of view, there will be more easier being unhealthy lifestyles provided there is more modernized.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.5

Complete response

7.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

321 words

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