Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

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These days

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there

are

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a lot of

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who believe that adolescents do not have to provide their tasks

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for

teachers, while others say that

homework

is important in raising a child.

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From

my point of view, I think that

taking

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taking, homework

homework

for teachers helps in raising children and in their development more than not giving it up, considering that it is not necessary. On the one hand

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many think it is easier for most people do not send children

homework

to their teachers, as they believe that

this

does not play a major role in

education

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the education

of children.

In other words

, it can affect the morale of students, and

homework

is not of much use, because most children write

from

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about

each other's Internet, and

therefore

they will get used to everything ready from an early age. Despite

this

, according to most parents in the 21st century, they study too much and there is no free time to relax.

On the other hand

homework

is very important in the development and upbringing of a child from school years.

For example

, to fully master the topic of the lesson and fix all incomprehensible points, as well as the training load, a guarantee that the child will not be sitting on the gadgets all the time. And thanks to different

homework

, you can develop other skills, character traits, like responsibility and punctuality.

Finally

, in my point of view, considering both versions of

this

discussion,

homework

should be given, but not so much as there are other lessons, because each student, teacher has important lessons. In conclusion, it is up to the ministry to decide whether to give

homework

to students or not to give education, but they must take into account the opinions of parents, students and teachers so as not to hurt their development in education.

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Instills discipline
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Independent learning
Reinforcement
Parental involvement
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Burnout
Student stress
Leisure time
Relevance of assignments
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Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

Fully explain your ideas

In some parts of the world, it is increasingly popular to research the history of one’s own family. Why do people want to do this? Is it a positive or negative development?

Young people are often influenced in their behaviors and situations by other of the same age. This is called peer pressure. Do the disadvantages outweigh the advantages.

Governments in many countries have recently introduced special taxes on foods and beverages with high levels of sugar. Some think these taxes are a good idea while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Instead of requiring primary school students to do experiments themselves, schools should only alllow them to watch experiments demonstrated by teachers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?