Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

These days
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there
are
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a lot of
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who believe that adolescents do not have to provide their tasks
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for
teachers, while others say that
homework
is important in raising a child.
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From
my point of view, I think that
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taking, homework
homework
for teachers helps in raising children and in their development more than not giving it up, considering that it is not necessary. On the one hand
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many think it is easier for most people do not send children
homework
to their teachers, as they believe that
this
does not play a major role in
education
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the education
of children.
In other words
, it can affect the morale of students, and
homework
is not of much use, because most children write
from
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about
each other's Internet, and
therefore
they will get used to everything ready from an early age. Despite
this
, according to most parents in the 21st century, they study too much and there is no free time to relax.
On the other hand
,
homework
is very important in the development and upbringing of a child from school years.
For example
, to fully master the topic of the lesson and fix all incomprehensible points, as well as the training load, a guarantee that the child will not be sitting on the gadgets all the time. And thanks to different
homework
, you can develop other skills, character traits, like responsibility and punctuality.
Finally
, in my point of view, considering both versions of
this
discussion,
homework
should be given, but not so much as there are other lessons, because each student, teacher has important lessons. In conclusion, it is up to the ministry to decide whether to give
homework
to students or not to give education, but they must take into account the opinions of parents, students and teachers so as not to hurt their development in education.

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