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As people live longer and longer, the idea of cloning human beings in order to provide spare parts is becoming a reality. The idea horrifies most people, yet it is no longer mere science fiction. To what extent do you agree with such a procedure? Have you any reservations?

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Dear
mistar
 Bob, I hope you are doing great. I’ve
finally
 managed to find some free time to write you a letter. As you know, I’m going to be the main speaker on the “World Without Trolls” conference. It will take part on the 21th of March at 3.00pm at Buddah conference
hall which
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hall, which
 is located on Minova street 3. As you can imagine, I’m super busy with the preparation for it right now. As we previously discussed, You have a lot to do in order to help me with
this
 presentation.
Firstly
, I expect you already prepared all slides
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 the slideshow. In
this
 context, I want to mention that photos
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of
 these slides should be bought or downloaded from free
photobases
, we don’t want problems with photos’ owners.
Finally
, I need your help with setting up the equipment. There is the full list of what we will need: a high
specs
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spec
 projector,
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an
 HDMI cable, and a mobile 5 in 1 sound system. If you have any questions about technical specs, copyright legislations or anything else, feel free to contact me via my mobile phone at any time of the day. Best regards, Nikita

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