1. Nobody know when the process of glass-making was invented. 2. Sugar like glucose is made up of carbon, hydrogen, and oxygen atoms. 3. Part of electricity used in United States today come from hydroelectric sources. 4. The language of the world present a fast array of structural similarities and differences. 5. The rise of multinationals have resulted in a great deal of deal ambiguliy because multinationals can operate in so many jurisdictions.

1. Nobody
know
Suggestion
knows
when the process of glass-making was invented. 2. Sugar like glucose is made up of carbon, hydrogen, and oxygen atoms. 3. Part of
electricity
Suggestion
the electricity
used in
United States
Suggestion
the United States
today
come
Suggestion
comes
from hydroelectric sources. 4. The language of the world
present
Suggestion
presents
a
fast
unusually great in size or amount or degree or especially extent or scope
vast
array of
structual
relating to or caused by structure, especially political or economic structure
structural
similiarities
the quality of being similar
similarities
and differences. 5. The rise of multinationals
have resulted
Suggestion
has resulted
in a great deal of deal
ambiguliy
in an ambiguous manner
ambiguously
because multinationals can operate in so many jurisdictions.

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