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Limited money should be spent on computer equipments or good teachers. Discuss both views and state your opinion

#money #computer #equipments #teachers
The challenge of
funds distribution
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funds, distribution
on
Suggestion
of
 education has become a burning issue these days. Here has long been a positive attitude towards using computers, While there are persuasive arguments in
favor
promote over another
favour
 of boosting teacher's wages. In
this
 essay, I will discuss about the benefit of both the studying system and will conclude with the system where we need to put
least amount
Suggestion
the least amount
 of cash
.
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.
 On the one hand, some people believe that highly-experienced teachers tend to be an integral part of successful education and cannot be replaced by expensive equipments.
Moreover
, the presence of
teacher
Suggestion
the teacher
a teacher
 is quite
indispensible
not to be dispensed with; essential
indispensable
 in school for having strong mutual interaction between the educator and disciples,
hence
, it will become a stepping stone towards their destiny
.
Accept space
.
Therefore
, an excellent teacher may encourage and support students, in case of any difficulties.
On the other hand
, nowadays students should learn up-to-date technology, which seems to be complicated without excellent school equipments.
For instance
, personal computers have become a common attribute of a human's life so modern schools cannot be imagined without using computers or laptops. Another argument is that innovative equipments in schools may make the educational process more efficient and available. But it is arduous to get the picture of
upgraded
Suggestion
upgrading
 equipments of your own.
Hence
, professors are the backbone of technology too. All in all, despite the view, that the computer equipments should be the main part of expenses, it cannot be ignored that professional teachers
plays
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play
crucial role
Suggestion
a crucial role
 in the education process
.
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.
Hence
, limiting money on computer’s expenditure will be worthwhile

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