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According to some scientists everyone will be speaking the same language in the future. If this prediction does come true, in my opinion, it will have both positive and negative ramifications.

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With
advancement
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the advancement
 of the technology our lives
are already being improved
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have already been improved
 a lot. If we start speaking same
language
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 most of the problems will be solved easily. Some scholars said that in coming time people there will be just
one
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language
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 in the world. In
this
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 we will discuss whether
this
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 will be more advantageous or demerits. To embark on,
main advantage
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the main advantage
a main advantage
 of speaking common
mother
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 tongue will erase the
communcation
the activity of communicating; the activity of conveying information
communication
communications
 gap.
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, now every other business is done on
global level
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a global level
 so it's hard for the person to communicate with each other, they will always need
translator
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a translator
translators
 or interpreter for understanding another person.
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, if
eveyone
all people
everyone
 will start using global
mother
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language
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 it will
benefical
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benefit
beneficial
 all the world. Another reason could be that people can easily adjust to
new environment
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the new environment
new environments
a new environment
.
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, nowadays
huge number
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the huge number
a huge number
 of people travel abroad for their studies or for the job so it will be comfortable for them to mingle with people and their
culture
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 oversea.
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, having
common
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a common mother tongue
mother
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 tongue brings lots of opportunities.
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, global
language
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 is good to erase communication errors and adjusting in
new place
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a new place
the new place
new places
.
On the contrary
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 side,
this
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 drift will have some
drawbacks
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drawbacks, also
also
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one
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 of them is
high unemployment rate
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a high unemployment rate
. To illustrate, the universal
language
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 will remove the translator from their jobs which in result there will
tremendous
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tremendously
 increase in jobless people in the world which is not good for
dvelopment
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the development
development
developments
 of the country. Another factor is it will
diminsh
decrease in size, extent, or range
diminish
 the ethnic
language
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.
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, if everyone will speak the universal
language
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 soon will the
culture
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 will be
disappered
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disappearing
disappeared
 as once
language
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 is once
ethinc
denoting or deriving from or distinctive of the ways of living built up by a group of people
ethnic
 identity and uniqueness of its
culture
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 and if
this
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 will gone nobody can even remember their own
culture
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.
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, it will have
adverse effect
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an adverse effect
 in today's generation and coming generations too.
Therefore
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,
one
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mother
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 tongue will lead unemployment and lose of
one
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's
culture
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 and heritage. To recapitulate, same
language
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 will make
communaction
the activity of communicating; the activity of conveying information
communication
 easy and
qork
activity directed toward making or doing something
work
 can be done without botheration or need of any interpreter, but on the other side there will augment in jobless people and soon will
culture
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 will fade way.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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