Now a days, public transport prices are constantly increasing. Why do you think it is happening? How can this problem be solved.

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It is
been
the state or fact of existing
being
observed nowadays that all these investments and
costs are recovered from public
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recover costs from the public
costs recover from public
costs recover from the public
costs are recovered from the public
by way of
increase
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in prices. To avoid increasing
such
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rates and burden on
public
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the public
, there
are
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is
some solution for reducing these costs. There are several reasons for raising
cost
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the cost
of public
transport
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.
Firstly
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, unbalancing between supply and demand can effect on prices.
This
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means that, on the one side because of increasing population and overcrowded streets, people rather to utilize from public
transport
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,
on the other hand
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, the shortage of public
transport
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such
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as bus and train, persuade government decision makers to raise prices in order to reduce people using from these devices.
Secondly
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,
increase
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of vehicle production expense in the factory, and maintenance costs can affect on
price
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of
transport
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.
For example
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, if
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price
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the price
of fuel or tire raise, it is natural for drivers that
increase
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the
price
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of fares.
Moreover
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, there are several solutions for reducing or holding constant
price
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of
transport
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. Investing of
transport
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system can help
to
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with
in
this
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subject. If the number of these
devises
an inclination or desire; used in the plural in the phrase 'left to your own devices'
devices
increase
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, it can create balance between supply and demand.
As a result
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of
this
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action, personal car in street decrease, overcrowded in street reduce and
also
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, the
price
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of
transport
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decline gradually. Another solution is that, a government given subsidies to companies for producing of public transports
such
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as train and bus and
likewise
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for consumable parts
such
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as tire and
also
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for fuels in order to reduce costs for
driver
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drivers
the driver
.
Consequently
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, when
expense decline
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the expense decline
for
driver
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the driver
a driver
drivers
, the
price
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of
transport
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also
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, decrease gently. To sum up, we should accept that if the governments not give facilities
such
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as subsidy for reduce the cost of producing public transp

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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