The scientist believes that computers will become more intelligent than human beings, some people find it is a positive while others think it is a negative development. Discuss both points and give your opinion.

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It is certainly true, that in today's
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-savvy world machines like computers develop day by day and
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day it will become more powerful than humans
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some people think it has fruitful outcomes
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whereas others believe that it is a negative
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. In my opinion, I believe that
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development
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the development
of computers has some negative effects, overall
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benefit to the whole universe.
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, both the sides are discussed
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. On the
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hand, it is considered by some that intelligence of computers will become more in the future.
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key benefit of it is that, with the help of computers we can do our work quickly and efficiently.
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computer
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gives
any answers
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accurate
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there are less chances or even no chances of any mistakes.
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,
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can calculate why large calculations in computers. It is
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less time consuming, we can get
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answers
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, it is argued by some that
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development
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the development
of
computer
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computers
the computer
has negative impacts. As they believe
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in future many people will lose their jobs because of the computer's intelligence.
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, if an individual does not have any knowledge of how to operate computers,
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he will not get the particular job.
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it may create unemployment.
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, humans rely on computers more and do their work more on it
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as a
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result sometimes
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result, sometimes
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can forget how to do simple calculations by manually. In conclusion, despite
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of
computers
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computational
computer
intelligence, I believe that growth of computers will be more beneficial to the universe in nearer future.
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