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A lot of money is spent on repairing old buildings. Instead of repairing old buildings that money should be spent on knocking down and build new ones. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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These days, the
marjoity
the property resulting from being or relating to the greater in number of two parts; the main part
majority
 people
are concerning
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concern
 about protecting old constructions. Some people believe that the government should not be wasted
money
 on
fixing historic
Accept comma addition
fixing, historic
 constructions
on the other hand
 others think that the government should be
spent
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spending
 more
money
 on historic buildings. In my opinion, I agree with the idea of consuming on fixing old buildings. I will examine some reasons to support my ideas.
To begin
 with, having historic buildings is an area is
matter
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a matter
 of pride and people of
such
 area can easily describe their hometown and locality to people of other parts of
country
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the country
.
Moreover
, it is good for people who work in
history
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historic
 industry or enjoy in
history
. It can entertain them
also
 it is good for children for learning about their
history
 and we may be beneficial for historians at their studies.
In addition
, historic constructions are the heritage of their nation. Another reason is that it can be beneficial for the growth of
economic
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economies
economy
 in
country
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the country
. Take an example, the prominent and popular historic buildings which are famous among national and international would make the country more popular aspect of economic due to the majority of tourists.
Moreover
, To sum up, in my opinion, knowing a
history
 is an essential for citizens and we cannot build up the future without knowing the
history
. There is more benefit to spend
money
 on old constructions
such
 as aspects of economic
therefore
 I agree with the idea of the government spending
money
 on fixing historic buildings.
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