The first chart below gives information about the money spent by British parents on their children’s sports between 2008 and 2014. The second chart shows the number of children who participated in three sports in Britain over the same time period.

The line graphs illustrate data about monthly expenditure on

Childs

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sports by Britain guardians and how many kids participate in three different games held between

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2008 to 2014.

Overall

, the amount of money increases with the passage of time.

Football

has a greater number of participants than

athlete

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and swimming games. There is some fluctuation seen in

football

and athlete

while

swimming has steadily increased in peak. The guardians start spending

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20

pounds

monthly on their child in 2008, reaching

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25

pounds

per month

at the end

of the year 2010. Onward

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2011 the amount was still becoming elevated and crosses almost 30

pounds

. In 2014 per month

sport

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fee was more than 30

pounds

. The numbers of children in 2008 in swimming and athlete were less than 2.5 million,

while

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football

was above 7.5 million. As

the

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time

pass

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, there was

slightly

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rising in numbers in a

football

game

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games

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with half or one million same with

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of swimmers,

on the other

hand

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a dramatic rise is observed in athletes almost

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in numbers

at the end

of time.