The Internet has dramatically altered our lives over the past few decades. Although some of these changes have been negative, the overall effect of this technology has been positive. What are your opinions on this

In the era of globalization, where we live in. Since

21st century

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the 21st century

, life has been converted into

virtual one

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virtual ones

a virtual one

the virtual one

. Obviously, time-consuming jobs can be accomplished

such

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as online education is existed on the net. As rose has thorn, surfing the net is being caused to kill valuable time, especially among

young generation

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the young generation

. People can no longer restrict

theirselves

reflexive form of "them"

themselves

on sitting in front of smart phones and laptops over much

time except

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time, except

that teenagers always put too much emphasize on social

networkings

an interconnected system of things or people

networks

such

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as

instagram

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,

tegram

a message transmitted by telegraph

telegram

and twitter.

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, they are keeping in touch with unknown people so that many children have

began

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begun

to behave badly towards their parents. Both views will be overseen with lots of details. Looking back 19th and 20th century, learning was quite hard and uncomfortable.

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, the majority of people had been remained less educated.

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, nowadays, by the net students are on the way attending e-lessons without any

uncomforts

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because a lot of programs as Zoom, online conference and

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are used to take part in each lesson.

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, population can be witnessed

safety namely

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safety, namely

they do not need to pay

extra prize

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the extra price

the extra prize

and time

on

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for

taxi and who never exhaust as opposed to bygone days.

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, as

pandemic

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the pandemic

a pandemic

is widespread over the world, all inhabitants require to exploit the net

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, they no longer join lessons and watch breaking news on a daily basis.

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, it

is drown

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has drowned

an

anology

an inference that if things agree in some respects they probably agree in others

analogy

between internet and knife. Namely, the knife may be utilized to both advantageous and disadvantageous sides. Axiomatically, some children as well as teenagers are using the net wrongly because as they are enthusiast, who wonder to do all

thing

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things

as much as they can. To illustrate,

young generation

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the younger generation

younger generation

can not isolate harm and kindness into 2 sides

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that they are mostly engrossed in contact with bad ethical peers. At the moment, the majority of teenagers are requesting independence from their parents,

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result some

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result, some

of them have decided not to obey roles of their parents. In conclusion,

outbreak

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the outbreak

of the net is the most vital for all ways and lots of teachers would be unemployed unless the net was not submitted to the world.

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, all of students have a chance

on

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in

their hands to attends e-lessons except that teenagers can prepare

theirselves

reflexive form of "them"

themselves

for upcoming

universities

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university

university's

exams,

otherwise

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they can no longer perform anything