Climate change is an issue. Do you agree with this?

I am a 27-year-old graduate student, who

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has also worked

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work as a research assistant in the department of Constitutional Law in a state university in Istanbul. I am studying in Public Law, and I am interested in Constitutional Law, International Law and Human Rights Law. My master thesis focuses on the Examination of the Discrimination based on Sexual Orientation in the case-law of

ECtHR

an Old Testament book telling of a beautiful Jewess who became queen of Persia and saved her people from massacre

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and Turkish Supreme Court. I have a knowledge of English and

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basic knowledge of French. I have started to learn French when I attended an exchange programme in Liege. I almost came up to Level B1 in French when I was there, but

unfortunetly

by bad luck

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I was unable to focus on it later as much as I did when I was in Belgium. I liked Belgium, especially Brussels, and I promised myself that if I could, I would live in Belgium again for a while. I see Brussels as a vibrant, multicultural city literally located in the heart of the Europe. The possibility of seeing people from different cultures together, hearing different languages together attracts me a lot. I like to spend my spare times watching films. I can call myself as a film enthusiastic, and I am

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, I like Herge as a cartoonist. I used to read

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books with a pleasure. When I was in Liege, I had the chance to collect some of

second

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books, and I was

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book, that still sits in my small library at a very reasonable price. As I mentioned before, I am currently working as a research assistant in the department of Constitutional Law in a state university in Istanbul, and I aim to pursue an academic career, and I believe that the more different experiences I have, the more qualified I will be as an academician, as a human.

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